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Post by Lady Amira Nuit on Oct 24, 2011 18:09:43 GMT -5
Donvel had been running for most of the day and into the night. Looking around he saw a cave and made his way over to it. Kagore his beloved and loyal friend had not shown up yet which began to worry him. As he made his way to the cave he began to get a very weird feeling. Turning to his left he had no times to prepare for the sudden line backer take down. The masked figure ran at him lowering themselves as their right shoulder went into his midsection with all their strength knocking him down.
In a daze he was trying to catch his breath Donvel looked around his vision blurred as he heard footsteps behind so in one quick move he rocked back his feet flying over his head and kicked his attacker in the stomach forcing them off their feet. He moved quickly as he straddled the person and penned their hands to the ground above their head. "Who are you?!" Donvel demanded but they weren't in a giving mood of information.
Instead his attacker rocked hard making Donvel fly forward and he watched amazed as his attacker flipped now straddling him and penning his arms down. There wads a moment of hesitation as Donvel saw his attackers eyes glisten in the moonlight. "Are you an....angel?"
This confused his attacker as they through down their sharp stick and ran for the cave door. Donvel jumped up after her. "No please wait!" But then he paused. Something else was tracking him. He took out his sword hoping not to get caught off guard again. Looking around he saw nothing and in hopes it was he just wish his dragon Kagore would show up now...
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Post by Lady Amira Nuit on Oct 27, 2011 23:12:14 GMT -5
(OOC: A few things my friend. Kagore is no where in the forest right now. She is off fighting. Donvel is human and is waiting for her but she found the other person that was just fighting with her. I was hoping your drgaon could befriend them both until Kagore showed up. Oh, and one more thing. Please do not give my characters words. I speak for them. I would never to that with yours unless I asked first because I do not know your characters personanlity. I just want to help you. I am sorry if I seem like I am being picky but I did this with almost everyone. Your not the first. Any questions, concerns, or ideas please feel free to shoot my way.)
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Post by elezar on Oct 28, 2011 5:05:04 GMT -5
(occ: I understand, i should of ask about your plans witht he story before posting about other characters. I also had forgot about the rule of not putting words into other character. Used to other forums where that was a option. I will rethink and post a new addition, removing my first.
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Post by Lady Amira Nuit on Oct 29, 2011 19:05:42 GMT -5
(OOC: I understand and I dont want to be controling of a thread either. I mentioned my dragon but she isnt in the woods. She is in the skys fighting another dragon. Maybe if I posted more of that it would be easier to follow too. Sorry on my part for that. If you want I can add a little more to mine so you can go on. Just let me know. ^_^
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Post by elezar on Nov 4, 2011 8:45:41 GMT -5
(OOC: Sorry for the wait my writing brain has been pushed aside by college. I deleted my first post to keep out any confusion for the readers. Also he doesnt have the tallon of eleazar. so he is a little skitish know someone else has the most powerful weapon against him)
Eleazar was once again flying over the forest he had come to love. Even though it rained alot and the weather alot fo time dreary made it all better. The music of nature never ended here to his kin ears. His wing just added to the music, the rush of air beating at a steady rate. As the sun set to the west Eleazar flew east toward the night sky. he knew of a few cave he could rest in for the night that were closer if he went east. In his short journy he found a cave, the clearing was large enough around the cave for him to land but the problem was first he saw a person run out of the mouth of the cave. A momment later another had emerged from the cave. Eleazar's eye focused in to see a man standing in the clearing, Then to Eleazars dislike the man drew his sword and stood ready, looking around him. Eleazar turned slightly south and flew to a nearby pund. he knew the pound was quite deep from past trips here but to land here was quite hard, so a easier sulotion in to change. Flying so low as to have this talons brush the trees Eleazar flew over the pound, Once centered over the pound, flames trickled out his black scales cover his body. In a moment his a half elf drop out a ball of black flame. his bones remained was hard as dragon bone to keep them from breaking if he land ground. it was only a matter of secounds before he hit the water. His feet the bottem and is knees bent to help take the landing. Ok it wasnt as deep as he had thought but it worked. As he rose to the surface he swam to the edge of the pond. As he began his walk towards the cave where the man was his innner flame quickly dried him. it a few mins he was at the cave ands had spotted the man. put his hand on the black rose blade he walked into the clearing.
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