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Post by BeastGoddess on Dec 18, 2013 14:50:52 GMT -5
I am writing a book and it does not have an ending yet. And the middle is a little sketchy. But I really want to turn it into a role play to see if I can get some more development in my characters. And try to round out the middle of the book and I really want to see what kind of mentality these characters get when giving a mind of there own and not just what I can come up with. It would help me a lot if any one was interested in playing out my book with me.
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Post by Bucks23 on Dec 19, 2013 16:56:35 GMT -5
Depends on what your book is about
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Post by BeastGoddess on Dec 20, 2013 7:04:55 GMT -5
Well it's about a girl who was created in a lab and has been trying to escape for years, well when she finally succeeds in evading her supernatural brother who has be driven to the point of madness by there farther(who is the one who created them) she runs in to a monstrous creature that is half wild and loaded with untapped power, who she soon comes to fall madly in love with. And they battle for their freedom and for the future that they now cling dearly to.
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Post by Duke Bippwatt on Dec 22, 2013 15:39:35 GMT -5
*is suddenly reminded of a scene from RWBY*
"Well... i-it's about a man with two souls, each fighting for control over his body."
Queen Blakey ftw.
And I just realized that I contributed no content to this thread.
*ahem*
As much as I'd love to help, I am afraid I already have far too much on my plate and too little time to spare...
Sadly, I must say that I will be unable to assist.
Although, if you want, I can read over what you write into your book and, ya know, check for grammar, spelling, punctuation. Try to find run on sentences, missing or too many line breaks, ect.
Ya know, general editing help. Once you get a significant chunk done, I can also help with plot and stuff.
So yeah.
Sent from my SCH-I535 using proboards
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Post by Bucks23 on Dec 22, 2013 18:00:10 GMT -5
Tempting. What sort of characters are you looking for?
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Post by BeastGoddess on Dec 30, 2013 14:46:28 GMT -5
Thanks much bipp @bucks: well there is the monster of a creature Main male (he is a mutation between a reptile and a human sortof) the sycophtic genius scientist the Main female calls father. (Human) The brother who dearly loves his sister but has madness deep inside him from there fathers tampering which clouds his judgment of right and wrong. (Definatly not human) There is a small mutation of a hot pink hedgehog who speaks that teams up with the main female. (Mutant hedgehog who pees acid) There is the main females younger sister who is greedy and vain which leads her to be there fathers favorite. (Genetically altered but weak in power) And of course all the extra fillers which can be fluffed in any way
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